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Monday, October 20, 2014

Chapter 1- Never Forgetting Neverland


Shouting from the hallway pulled the girl out of sleep. Her deep blue eyes revealed themselves under tired lids. The sapphire orbs flickered over to a clock on her white nightstand. Small glowing numbers revealed that it was just past midnight. She rolled over in her bed, pulling the covers closer. The annual scolding of her mother towards her drunken father slipped under the bedroom door. The 8 year old could hear the constant screaming and profanity through the thin walls. She willed the fighting away. This had been going on so long; the girl had no tears left to shed over the matter. A soft tapping came from the direction of the window. Sitting up abruptly, she strained to see outside

A smile of pearled white teeth stared at her through the glass. Bright, playful green eyes sparkled with amusement. A tangled mop of reddish brown hair sat under an olive green cap with a red feather. A boy, maybe 15 or 16 years old, hovered outside of her window. And yes, I did say hovered. The girl's room sat on the third floor of an old apartment complex. The boy tapped again, and motioned for her to open the window. Returning the wide smile, she happily obliged. Sliding the window pane upwards, she watched in wonder as her visitor floated into the room. Hearing the arguing going on in the other room, the boy frowned. Touching down onto the carpeted floor, he crossed his arms. "Are they really doing this again?" He questioned. His emerald irises held their playful spark, but the rest of his expression was carved in disapproval.

Sighing, the girl nodded. Crouching next to her bed, she pulled out a pair of worn sneakers and placed them on her feet. Slipping on a dark blue sweater off of her floor, the girl tied back her tangled blonde hair. She grabbed a small tearing backpack off of her dresser and slung it over one shoulder. "Can we go? Please?" She whispered, just loud enough so that the other could hear. Her wide blue eyes stared up at the teenager hopefully.

The boy looked around for a moment, as if looking for something. Realizing that it was not there, he sighed. Placing a palm on his forehead, he looked at the girl apologetically. "I forgot, Tinks didn't want to come. She is kind of tired of flying back and forth. So...no Pixie dust this time. Sorry, Casey."

The girl, Casey, smiled and shook her head. "That's okay. We still have the faith and trust part, right?"

His smile popped up again. "Yeah. Besides, I can always carry you. We're only flying up to the stars." Turning his back to her, the boy crouched down. He motioned for her to climb up onto his back, and she did. Wrapping her small arms around his shoulders, Casey held on tight. Trotting over to the window, her friend placed one leg on the wooden frame. Reinforcing his hold on the girl, he jumped.

For a second, they were falling as quickly as a stone would in water. The wind whipped Casey's ponytail up so that it was a vertical pillar of gold. Her companion's hat almost flew off of his head. At the last possible moment, he pulled up. The girl's heart dropped to her stomach as they soared through the air. The city slowly faded away below them. Within a few minutes, it was nothing more than a small cluster of lights. Her grip tightened around the magical being, but not out of fear. Casey loved the feeling of flying.

As they picked up speed, she recognized the familiar rushing of stars as they ascended. The roaring of the wind blasted in her ears like the howling of some kind of monster. It soon got to the point where she wanted to cover her ears, but knew that if she let go then she would fall. They were now going so fast that the stars were just a white blur, there seemed to be no empty space between. "Close your eyes!" Her friend shouted. His voice could barely be heard over the screaming of the air. Nodding slightly, Casey squeezed her eyes shut. This was her least favorite part of the flight, The Flash. At least, that's what the teen called it.

From what she had heard, no human should ever see it. It was like a sonic blast of light that was more intense than the sun. Under her eyelids, the girl could see a bright burst of red light. An intense heat washed over her, almost hot enough to physically burn her. But as suddenly as it had come, the Flash ended. A constant ringing sounded in her ears as they slowed down. Blinking a few times, it took a while for her blue eyes to adjust.

It was morning; the sun was just coming up over the ocean. The sparkling blue and green waters housed playful dolphins that jumped up every few seconds. In the center of the deep sea sat an island. The small fortress of land looked as though a large sea monster had taken several bites out if the edges in a crude attempt to make a 6 pointed star. Its many bays opened their mouths to the ocean. The tall cone of an old volcano sat in the center. Green forests covered almost every meter of the island. Mountain ranges traced the outline of the land. As the two descended towards the forest, Casey could make out a pirate ship in the cove. Its magnificent white sails were lowered so that they did not pull the vessel away from its anchor. The polished surface of the decks held several pirates. All filthy and muscled in ways that shouldn't be humanly possible. A figure clad in red could be seen near the helm. He seemed to be staring up at them.

The boy whisked them past the cove and towards an old tree near the volcano. Vines and moss covered the surface of the plant, acting as a natural camouflage. Touching down onto the ground, he gently placed Casey on her feet and winked. Clearing his throat, the boy deepened his voice to resemble a grown man's. "Here it is, Smee! Peter's hideout! We've finally found it, and I shall claim it for my own!" Almost immediately, a group of boys tumbled out of several rotted cavities and knotholes. They all brandished different sorts of melee weapons; ranging from slingshots to clubs with rusted nails in them. The small crowd howled like Indians, looking around for a certain pirate and his men. Spotting the teenager, the boys all lowered their weapons.

"God, Peter!" A boy with curly brown hair spoke up. He was a bit on the large side, and wore a stained cotton shirt and torn slacks. A wooden club sat in his hand; its rounded tip almost touched the ground. His large hazel eyes barely peeked out under his chubby cheeks. He couldn't have been older than 10.”Don't scare us like that!"

Casey couldn't contain her laughter. Doubling over, she clutched her stomach and burst into a silent giggle fit. A few strands of blond hair fell into her face as she did so. The teenager, Peter, chuckled lightly.

As if just realizing she was there, the other boys crowded around her. Suddenly surrounded by the Lost Boys, the girl tried to keep up with all of the different conversations that they sparked up. The voices seemed to buzz around here; they were talking all at once. Save a small 6 year old with jet black hair, as he was mute and had never talked a day in his life. But the silent boy was tugging on the sleeve of her jacket, quietly asking for her attention.

"Where have you been?" "Why did you leave?" "Can I show you this cool trick later?" "Casey, did you bring me anything?" By the time Peter whistled and told them all to shut up, the girl's head was already swimming from the attention. At home and at school, she was always ignored or teased for being strange. She had no friends there, and tended to play by herself at recess. But here, in Neverland, Casey was never left alone. She always had someone to talk to or something to do. The perks of being the only Lost Girl. She wished that she could stay there forever. Unfortunately, that was impossible.

For some reason, the island didn't allow her to stay for more than a week at a time. Luckily, that was the equivalent of one night back home, so there was rarely any hassle or calling of the authorities by her parents. Only a few times her mother had noticed that Casey wasn't nearby; and had finished filling in a missing persons report by the time she got back. But, in order to "recharge" enough to be able to return, the girl had to spend a normal week in her world. So, her time in Neverland never seemed to be enough. This had been going on for the last 2 years, after Peter had somehow found her trying to run away from home. And the others didn't seem to have aged a day.

"Alright!" Pan shouted. The remaining murmurs from the boys died down immediately. Compared to the other Lost Boys, Peter was by far the oldest. He towered over the rest of them. The closest one to his age was probably Slightly. The boy was around 13 with bright yellow hair that seemed almost unnatural. His yellowish brown eyes and scrunched up face gave him the appearance of a fox. Slightly almost matched Peter in height as well.

"We'll have time to catch up with our friend later." The leader announced. His right hand rested itself on the hilt of a dagger. The weapon lay in a leather sheath that was strapped to his waist. "The old Codfish had found his treasure again! And we need to steal it back." The rest of the boys cheered, waving their makeshift weapons in the air. Casey couldn't help but smile. This time, Peter had promised that she would be able to join in. This was going to be great.

 

Sunday, October 12, 2014

Idea: Blind Hope

Summary: 
     The Barthel brothers lived alone in the woods with their blind younger sister, Joy. When their house is burned down, their sister is kidnapped for unknown reasons. Carter and Ryan, the brothers, set out to rescue their sister. On their travels, the brothers encounter the outside world and all of the horrors it holds. Told from Joy's perspective, the story hops back in forth between her memories and an omnicient view on her brothers' adventures. The first person perspective stops halfway through, but the brothers' tale continues. After two or three years of searching, Carter and Ryan find their sister to be dead. The final chapter shall be in Joy's first person perspective, where she is a spirit watching her brothers. 

Characters:
     Name: Joy Barthel
     Age: 12
     Physical Characteristics: Blonde hair and grey-blue eyes. 4'9 with tan skin. 
     Personality: Always looks to the bright side of things. Is always cheerful and smiling. Possibly the most innocent one could be. 

     Name: Carter Barthel. 
     Age: 16
     Physical Characteristics: Brown hair and green eyes. 5'7. Tan. 
     Personality: Is the joker of the family. Normally, everything he says either comes out as a bad joke or something slightly sarcastic. He tends to push people away more, but cares about his sister more than anyone.

     Name: Ryan Barthel
     Age: 19
     Physical Characteristics: Short blonde hair and green eyes. 6'0. Tan and muscular. 
     Personality: Is the "responsible" one of the group. He is the only one who goes outside of the forest, but only to work and buy supplies. Ryan is more quiet and solumn than his brother, and is not the humorous type. He takes everything seriously and cares for his two siblings deeply.

Idea: Never Forgetting Neverland


Summary: 
     Casey was taken to Neverland every night when she was younger. Peter Pan and the Lost Boys were her only relief from being bullied, as well as the stress of her parents constant fighting. But because of magical reasons, the girl couldn't stay in Neverland for more than a week (one night in our world). Promising to find a way to keep Casey there forever, Pan sends her back home after Captain Hook almost manages to kill the 8 year old. 

     Seven years later, and Casey is still having a hard time adjusting to real life. She has close to no friends and is constantly being bullied for various reasons. Her mother had died years ago, leaving the teen with her alcoholic father. Her head stayed in the clouds, but she had almost completely forgotten that Neverland was real. 

     When a new kid, Peter Panson, comes to her school, the memories start to spark. The two become very close friends and are almost inseparable. On a school camping trip, Casey almost falls down a steep mountain while hiking with others. Peter saves her and his true identity is revealed. Claiming he found a way to keep her in Neverland, Pan takes her back that night. 

     But Neverland isn't as fun as she remembers. Its far more dangerous. 

Characters: 
     Name: Casey Dean
     Age: 8/15
     Physical Characteristics: 5'3, long blonde hair and blue eyes. Tan skin. Not very busty. Has a scar under her left eye from being clipped with the Captain's hook.
     Personality: Daydreamer. Happy person who has learned to hide when she is in both physical and emotional pain. Up to a certain point, of course. Bookworm. Shy but will not shut up around friends. Can be sarcastic at times. A bit of a coward. 

     Name:  Peter Pan
     Age: Unknown. Appears as a 15/16 year old boy. 
     Physical Characteristics: 5'6 Short reddish brown hair and green eyes. Tan skin. Sort of muscular but still looks fairly skinny, maybe even too much to be healthy. 
     Personality: He tends to act on his emotions and doesn't think things through. Pan is a very cheerful person who only wants to mess around and have fun. Very outgoing and loud, no matter who he is around. But Peter takes his friends' safety very seriously and will do anything to protect them. 

Tuesday, October 7, 2014

Idea: Kyne of Zestia

Summary:
     Kyne is an alien from planet Zestia, which is very similar to Earth but is a bit ahead in technology. On Zestia, there are monsters called Jaaku. There are 3 different levels of Jaaku.

          -Level 1 Jaaku, which are the easiest to kill. However, they can only be killed by wood.
          -Level 2 Jaaku, which are a bit harder to kill. They can only be killed by either steel or iron.
          -Level 3 Jaaku cannot be killed. If they can, the Zestians have not found a way in the thousands of years they had inhabited the planet.

     Kyne and other children are sent to Earth to escape the Jaaku, but are somehow followed. Each group of children has a caretaker, who have been to Earth before and are there to keep the children safe from harm. Over the years, Kyne loses her group and caretaker, Mikal.

     Living alone, she saves humans Daniel and Jenny Thompson from a level 1 Jaaku. Allowing them to live in her base, Kyne goes around killing every Jaaku she comes across. Or at least tries to.

     Jenny somehow gets killed by a Level 3 Jaaku, and the two teens have to flee. Kyne agrees to train Daniel so that they can find a way to kill the Level 3 and get revenge.

Characters: 
     Name: Kyne (takes on the surname Mikal out of respect for her caretaker)
     Age: 16
     Physical Traits: Long/straight midnight blue hair. On Zestia, all people have colorful hair and normal human colors such as brown, black, and blonde are uncommon. Silver eyes with flecks of emerald green. 5'6 , thin and strong.
     Personality: Is very cold and tends to shut herself away from any emotion since she lost her friends. Kyne has a kind heart, but shows it in strange ways. If reminded of her past, however, Kyne is more prone to show emotions such as anger and sadness.


     Name: Daniel Thompson
     Age: 16
     Physical Traits: Short brown hair. Blue eyes with brown flecks. 5'8, a bit on the muscular side,  but still thin and long-limped. Kind of awkward with his movements.
      Personality: He is a very open person about his emotions, the exact opposite of current-day Kyne. Daniel tends to also act on his emotions without thinking much about the consequences. The human cares a lot about his younger sister, and his actions are mostly based around her safety.